Is this a poem good? Trustful comments, please.?

Question

He is the man of my life.
Not the guy of my life,
But the man of my life.
He is the man of my life,
Not the guy of my life
Because the man I love,
Is not a guy,
Nor a boy.
Nor a male,
He is the man
That is always there for me.
He is the man
That will fight for me,
For what he believes,
Not what my father believes.
He is the man
That loves me,
For who I am.
These are the main points of
Being the man of my life
And this man has all of these points.
And that is why
He is the man of my life,
Not the guy of my life.

Answer 1

a little to repetitive for my taste....and it sounds like you couldnt live without this person, which bugs me since im a little feminist lol otherwise, its powerful

Answer 2

This is repetitive emotions. I think you could make it into a great poem. I do like "He is the man that will fight for me , for what he elieve, not what my father believes."
"Loving me for who I am" and "man of my life" is cliche'...try to stay away from cliche's if you can. They tend to take away from your originality and creativity. However, I see ."..of my life" is very pertinent to your poem... think of another word or your own phrasing for that portion. Make me picture how strong, loving, compassionate he is. Make me picture you telling me with out stopping to breathe.

Answer 3

I like it

Answer 4

i would have liked to see a better pattern emerge...but you get your point across (and i like that you don't feel compelled to do endrhymes)

so i like this =)