My Girl
I knew
A girl
Who had
Blonde curls
She was
So cute
She was
Dads’ girl
But, then
One day
Her hair
Fell out
Her dad
He said
You’re my
Son now!
The girl
She cried
And could
Have died
But, bought
A wig
To ease
Her mind
The wig
It was
Made of
Blonde curls
Dad said
You are
Once more
My girl
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2007-07-15 13:52:13 · 3 answers · asked by ? 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Aww another successful poem to me! You are a great poet dont let anyone tell you differently!KEEP WRITTING!
2007-07-15 16:32:40 · answer #1 · answered by Sh00ting_St@r! 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Hmmm, good poem...I know you couldn't do it on Yahoo...but you might try to split the words up to make a Carmen Figuraturum, with the words forming the outline of a circle (moon), or curved like a partial moon...experiment with it, the words pairs will let you do things full lines would have prevented.
good job.
2007-07-19 01:41:15 · answer #2 · answered by Kevin S 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
All i have to do is read your poem to laugh. Great job!
2007-07-16 14:42:24 · answer #3 · answered by Barb S 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋