The place was dead quiet for many seconds till Diane’s voice started calling Angela’s name over and over which was of no use.
2007-07-15 10:19:35 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
The place was unnervingly quiet until Diane's voice was heard calling Angela's name, but to no avail.
2007-07-15 11:17:29 · answer #1 · answered by *~Simplymyself~* 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The place was dead quiet for many seconds. Suddenly Diane's voice pierced the stillness calling Angela's name over and over, but to no avail.
2007-07-15 11:46:01 · answer #2 · answered by Barbara E 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
An eternity of silent seconds passed until Diane's voice pierced the emptiness, repeatedly calling Angela's name in vain.
2007-07-15 10:42:07 · answer #3 · answered by mrm 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
For a long time there was no sound. Then, Diane stated calling, "Angela, Angela," over and over. There was no response.
2007-07-15 11:43:52 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
The silence was deafening, and it seemed as though an eternity passed as Diane's voice called Angela's name, but it all seemed in vane.
2007-07-15 10:29:53 · answer #5 · answered by Nemo the geek 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
You do need to change it, cause it just doesn't read well. Plus it's too long. Try simplifying it.
2007-07-15 10:30:12 · answer #6 · answered by moveandlose 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋