She was the most beautiful girl
But she hated herself, living in her two worlds
What do you think when you’ve been told your whole life
Half of you isn’t right
And you should have been born pure white?
So she’s drinking a lot
And she’s smoking a lot
And she controls herself
Glad you can’t read her thoughts
She tells herself she’s secure
But when it all stops
She’s grown into a world
Where she’ll never quite see
She’s such a beautiful girl
2007-07-15 05:39:24 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Cultures & Groups ➔ Other - Cultures & Groups
not about me... about a friend
2007-07-15 05:44:36 · update #1
and i'm not against my own race... this is just the truth about a certain individual
2007-07-15 05:48:35 · update #2
Touching poem.
What a sorry predicament.
I think of people like her as having the best of two worlds, I hope someday she'll think that way too.
2007-07-15 05:50:54 · answer #1 · answered by Zeera 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Are you the type of person that would take Charlie?
I'm no critic but I think its pretty. I'm sorry you're going through all of this and I think you need a friend.
2007-07-15 12:46:39 · answer #2 · answered by ? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the scansion and meter are really bad, the subject topic is a good one but bears better use of the language.
2007-07-15 12:43:43 · answer #3 · answered by essentiallysolo 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's okay.
2007-07-15 12:41:57 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋