What do these poem make you think?

Question

You tried to control me,
but it never really worked.
You tried to make me say things,
but the words wouldn't come out.
You tried to force me to do things,
but you never knew how.
You were jealous of me,
but I don't know why.
You wanted to take over my body,
but I didn't let you.
You wanted more than me,
but I always had less than you anyway.
You never had faith in yourself,
but I always had faith in you and myself.

Also another poem:
What is evil?
Could it be you?
OR could it be me?
What about your friends?
OR your loved ones?
What could it be really?
OR do you already know?

Is it the hatred on this world?
Is it the people whom have no soul?
Is it the sadness around us?
Is it the unforgiving people?

Who does really know?
I don't but maybe you do!
If you do know, do tell me and others,
So we can destroy it,
or try and live around it!

Answer 1

If you are writing about someone you know, I'd say that you should stay away from him/her. This person will only cause you grief.

Answer 2

First one says to me that you were in an abusive relationship or something happened to you, like a family member abused you or violated you...

second one says to me that we never really know who we can trust in this world and we never know who is evil.
I spent my life pretending my grandfather wasnt evil and hiding the truth from everyone... In the end I realised no matter how much I pretended he didnt do anything wrong, it wasnt going to change anything.

This is what I thought of when reading your poems.
They do, of course, need some work but there is a good base there.

Answer 3

Try to make poetry that can draw someone in. Right now, I'm eating a peach, and browsing ebay..and your poem just doesn't go right for my current situation....I found it a bore to read, I skimmed the words, doesn't make sense. Boring. Maybe if I was locked in a cell and had internet access, then yeah, I'd probably bend the words and make them mine.