Is this a good poem. Trustful comments, please.?

Question

I know we broke up months ago,
But I still love you.
There’s something about you,
That I can’t let go of.
You’re the best thing that happened to me,
And if I explain why you’re the best thing that ever happened to me,
I’m afraid that I will break down and cry.

I know you’re probably thinking
That I should get over you,
But it’s hard to get over you
When everything reminds me of you.
You’re the one that I always think about,
And it’s hard to get over somebody
If they’re all you think about.

I would look right into your eyes,
And say what I just wrote.
But after knowing you,
You won’t understand
And you won’t care.

Answer 1

It depends, for publication no, but if you wrote this to give to a specific girl, yes it's very good. If it says how you really feel. The next step is to actually give it to the girl.

Answer 2

I didnt like it. I dont think this is even a poem. You just said everything straight out. There's nothing here for the reader to guess or read in between the lines. There was no comparison to anything, I wasnt even able to picture any images in my mind. I appreciate the fact that it wasnt rhyme but it still seemed imature. I felt very indifferent as i finished reading your piece. I think it needs a lot of work

Answer 3

I didn't like it until the last verse. It kinda sells: could be a tool
for those trying to let go of lost love and move on. I like it.

Answer 4

It needs form, meter, rhythm, metaphor, simile, imagery, alliteration, assonance and rhyme ... or at least one of those.

Answer 5

I think you should make into a song!!!!

great job!!!

Answer 6

i like it.