You Were the One
You were the one that was always by my side
You were the one that was there after every fight
You were the one that helped me decide
You were the one that made everything all right
You were the one that called me baby
You were the one that that will always know me
You were the one who said maybe
You were the one who tried to show me
You were the one who said all those things
You were the one who would count the hours
You were the one who thought you were king
You were the one who would stop and smell the flowers
Your still the one Who does that stuff
Your still the one who is as gentle as a dove
Your still the one who thinks that he's tough
Your still the one who with all my heart I love
2007-07-12 13:49:48 · 22 answers · asked by SAXplaya! 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Interesting that some people thought this poem was about young love...I thought it sounded like a tribute to a father (or father figure).
I agree that the "you were the one" gets a bit repetitive (and "your" should be "you're" in the last section), but otherwise I really liked it.
2007-07-12 17:59:00 · answer #1 · answered by KAL 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow... each line is so different to the next but somehow, no matter how i read it... it makes me feel like i was on 2nd grade... is that a good thing? or this clusters of letters are just plain stupid?
2007-07-12 20:56:18 · answer #2 · answered by Toic 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it is really sweet.And i hope that i can wright a poem like that someday.My dad would of writen a poem like that.And would of liked it if he was a live.
2007-07-12 20:55:49 · answer #3 · answered by Meggie-Boo 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You were the one who hit the mark
You were the one to touch my heart.
WTG!
2007-07-12 22:31:00 · answer #4 · answered by Sam 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it, a lot.
except the one line
"youre still the one who does that stuff"
sounds kinda..idk. doesn't really fit.
other than that its really good.
2007-07-12 20:55:05 · answer #5 · answered by butterr. 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i REALLY like it. It had a nice way about it. nice development. very sweet. A+
2007-07-12 20:53:48 · answer #6 · answered by Seth 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very sweet ,young love is so cute .
2007-07-12 20:53:38 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
your gonna make the one shed tears of joy!
2007-07-12 20:53:46 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Snap snap snap snap snap snap! Bravo!
2007-07-12 20:53:38 · answer #9 · answered by Shon 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I dont, it's too BORING and has been done way to many times..
2007-07-12 20:52:52 · answer #10 · answered by Lisa D 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋