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I have written this poem(or somthing)
Im only 12 and I need it to be perfectly spell checked
If it is a poem what kind?
One Little Girl
Two Mean Men
A gun
A Emty room
A big louad boom
A cry for help
A tear from her face
A Bloody Face
A little girl
in a conner
a bolet in her head
Dead

2007-07-12 07:54:50 · 9 answers · asked by ashiee101 1 in Education & Reference Words & Wordplay

9 answers

One Little Girl
Two Mean Men
A gun
A Empty room
A big loud boom
A cry for help
A tear from her face
A Bloody Face
A little girl
in a corner
a bullet in her head
Dead

That is a very sad poem, especially for a 12 year old to be dealing with.

Anything can be a poem, if that is how the author intended it. It would be considered free verse, I would imagine.

2007-07-12 08:00:25 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1 0

One Little Girl
Two Mean Men
A gun
An (not A) Empty room
A big loud boom
A cry for help
A tear from her face
A Bloody Face
A little girl
in a corner
a bullet in her head
Dead

Very sad

2007-07-12 08:05:07 · answer #2 · answered by barelyblue82 3 · 1 0

One Little Girl
Two Mean Men
A gun
A Emty room (empty)
A big louad booml (loud)
A cry for help
A tear from her face
A Bloody Face
A little girl
in a conner (corner)
a bolet in her head (bullet)
Dead



a death poem. ur mean

2007-07-12 08:01:13 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0 1

One Little Girl
Two Mean Men
A gun
AN EMPTY room
A big LOUD boom
A cry for help
A tear from her face
A Bloody Face
A little girl
In a conner
A BULLET in her head
Dead
---------------------------------
Dude, that is so violent. Reminds me of Gyakuten Saiban.

2007-07-12 08:05:18 · answer #4 · answered by . 2 · 0 0

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2016-12-10 10:07:52 · answer #5 · answered by meran 4 · 0 0

Empty
loud
corner
bullet

2007-07-12 07:59:15 · answer #6 · answered by ~**~ 2 · 0 0

I'll tell you what kind of poem it is, it's a disturbing poem... especially coming from a 12 year old...

2007-07-12 08:23:35 · answer #7 · answered by nosoop4u246 7 · 0 0

'A emty room' shoud be 'An empty room'
'A big louad boom' should be 'A big, loud boom'
'in a conner' I'm assuming should be 'In a corner'
'a bolet in her head' should be 'A bullet in her head'

2007-07-12 08:00:51 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

it needs to be
An empty room

because empty starts with a vowel

2007-07-12 08:03:55 · answer #9 · answered by Sarah L 1 · 0 0

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