The aging question...have a look...?
do you like my poem? its not ment to be ne thing great i just want peoples opinions thanksxx
The Aging Question
Age is just a number,
or is it?,
Age is time,
We watch,
We learn,
We grow,
All in good time,
I want to fulfill my life and life long,
I could die tommorow,
We need to watch,
We need to learn,
We need to grow,
Unpredictable things happen in time,
Older people are wiser,
Of course,
They have watched,
They have learnt,
They have grown,
Let time tell!
I wish i could just stop time,
But then,
We couldent watch,
We couldent learn,
We couldent grow,
Choose your time wisely!
2007-07-11 23:22:03 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Other - Family & Relationships
It's OK and true. But it seems more like a statement than a poem.
2007-07-11 23:38:48 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I see people have their jokes! All in all, I liked your poem.
2007-07-11 23:36:21 · answer #2 · answered by monicastocker74 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice but you mispelled quite a few words.
2007-07-11 23:24:47 · answer #3 · answered by PEGGY S 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
"Older people are wiser"
Nope senile is morre to the point
2007-07-11 23:24:39 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋