What do you think of this movie plot?

Question

I'm working on a movie plot and script and see what i can do with it but what do you think about it.

A college roomate gets a madeover and gains a new personality by his gay hairstylist roomate to ask out the woman of his dreams and take a new prospective on life(i'm still trying to reword it)

but tell me what you think.

but tell me what you think

And this is not discrimitive to gay people if it offends anyone.

The gay roomate is hair styling on the side and he falls in love for his straight roomate after he kisses him when he was drunk and after his transformation his feelings for him gets stronger.

Answer 1

Reverse everything and it would be ten times more interesting. Make the stylist straight, the roomate gay and he finds the man of his dreams. It is one of those femme butch things and you get to choose it he too much of one or not enough of the other and why does the stylist seem to see what he needs and he doesn't. That will sell.

Answer 2

I don't want to sound negative but his has been done so many times before. The gay stylist alone has appeared in Mrs Doubtfire and that recent Amanda Bynes film where he helps her look like a boy. It needs something original, tghat's the really hard bit. Good luck though. Oh and the new personlity won't work, because it has to be the looks/image that keeps them apart, not character.

Answer 3

Is that the beginning of the movie or its resolution? What exactly is the conflict? Also, is hairstyling something the roommate does on the side or are they going to barber college or something?

Answer 4

it sounds good so far. will the gay hairstylist fall for the roommate?