Poem - I am a Jehovahs Witness and it is about my faith. Please let me know what you think! :)))?

Question

Jehovah is my helper!

Hebrews 13:6 'Jehovah is my helper; I will not be afraid'

We live in this sick wicked system of things so far and deep.
We try each and every day forever in Jehovah's mind to keep.

We have so many things in our life, sickness, Old age, depression, and anxiety that all seems so wrong.
We know Jehovah never meant for any of these pains, but if we stay close to our brothers and sister we will stay strong.

Our brothers and sisters are not perfect, yes this is true.
So let's try not to be so critical of them, and allow them to help us when we are blue.

Isaiah 41:13 says "Do not be afraid" That Jehovah is grasping our right hand.
When we have problems come up in our life we have to remember for Jehovah to take our stand.

(it is a long poem so Im gonna have to add several times)

You many feel like you are alone and the pain of the old system makes life so hard to live.
Remember Jehovah is always there to hear our prayers and for this privilege a great sacrifice was made, it was his son Christ Jesus he had to give.

"Hearer of Prayer" is what Jehovah is called, how loving and comforting that we have this at our disposal, if only we would put this action into play.
Yes, let him hear your prayers, draw close to him, let him be your friend, then forever with Jehovah is where you will stay.

The great day of Jehovah is near and it will not be late and in the we all must trust
For us to receive this wonderful reward and great salvation this quality is a must.

Endurance is important for all if we want everlasting life so therefore we must keep running the race.
If we endure when we have all these trails that Satan puts in front of us you will able to meet your favorite man of old face to face.

Let's never get caught up in these world's affairs, in this and that, in all the problems that could be.
Rather let's keep our eyes simple and fixed on the reward that Jehovah has before us all, let that be all we try to see.

The world empire of false religion, Babylon the Great, will soon come to its destruction end in the future that is very near.
Are you reading your Bible, going to the meetings, talking to Jehovah and being his friend, having the faith that you should and proving it by your works? If so, then you will have nothing to fear.

Do you have the proper fear of Jehovah? I hope that you do!
The patriarch Abraham was one such man, had this fear. Can you think of other faithful men of old that had this wonderful point of view?

Oh yes, Abraham is an excellent example for us to follow for he had trials and still remained faithful and endured until the end.
What for us? Will we do the same? Do we have the same implicit trust in God's promises like Abraham did, the promises that caused Jehovah to allow his son to die and on earth he had to send?

Soon Paradise will be restored; this what we have to focus on when we have things come in our way. Focus on these new few lines of this poem and the blessings that God's Kingdom promises to bring and hopefully you won't sway.

There will be no reason for any tears of sorrow then "He will wipe out very tear from their eyes and death will be no more" as Revelation 21:3,4 brings out.
Because you have done everything that Jehovah has asked and drawn close to him, of these promises you can have no doubt.

The once lame are walking, yes, skipping about for joy!
In fact, lover to your right and you can see Moses speaking to the little boy!

Lost arms and legs have been miraculously restored.
All of these wonderful things we have we can thank our wonderful father, our Lord!

The dear can now hear, The previously blind now see,
These things really can touch your heart, don't you agree?

There will be glowing health, eternal youth, and abundance of food that is good.
These are thing that brothers and sisters look forward to, these are things that will happen, understood?

Yes, Jehovah's day is rapidly approaching and these things will come very soon. What do we have to do to get these blessings and carry us through?
Keep on enduring under pressure, hardship and trials and draw close to our heavenly Father, then you and I and all of our family will be able to live in perfect peace and harmony serving our loving father Jehovah in Paradise anew!

Ok, that is the end of the poem! :)))

Please let me know what you think... Does it flow ok? I know its about my faith... I do have other ones Im gonna put on here also... This is one that I put a lot of time into and means a lot to me. I love poems! :))) I write them about familes, faith (like above) anniversary, love, everything. :)

EDIT
It suppose to be
~ the Deaf can now hear
~ and Look over to your right and you can see Moses speaking to the little boy.

Thanks yall!!

Yep, Im 29 :)

Thank you!!! Thank you all!!!

Thank you Benn! It is from the heart... I do agree with the sentence advice....I will try to find a way to work around that with some of my other poems.. Thanks! :))))

Answer 1

I LOVE IT!!
thanxxx!!!

its nice to read stuff like this especially when you are going through hard times.

Answer 2

Hi Sister, I must said that you have the talent in poetry and keep up such encouraging poems that will help to lift up the tired and weary souls to endure and not give up.

I also notice your very nice rhymes and rhythms and real strong faith in Jah's Word too and so keep it up, "Learn about the only true God." Continue in your fine work and Jehovah will not forget your efforts.

Please, how far are you now in your Bible Reading? Have you been in the Truth for more than five years?

Kindly answer these two questions.

Answer 3

Hi, I am one of Jehovah''s Witnesses too. I have been brought up in the truth and am an unbabtized publisher wanting to go to London Bethel. I have tried to speak to Jehovah's Witnesses on here but i Can't. How was your assembly and do you like the new book that came out.

Email me on [e-mail]

and prove that you are a Jehovah's Witness.
What is your favourite scripture?

Answer 4

Hemophilia isn't an exception, and our children are rasied according to God's standards in the Bible. If a child who is one of Jehovah's Witnesses attends public school, they can play in sports if it doesn't take time out of field service and meetings, adn they can go to Non-Witness parties as long as it isn't a birthday party. We all go door-to-door to preach.

Answer 5

Honestly i am not a fan of poetry...as in i have no interest in making poems myself plus im no good at it....but gurl you got talent. This is a very beautiful and well put poem...which words are very encouraging and true. Keep it up sister...and hope to be reading more poetry from you soon....

Answer 6

My comments are strictly on the 'poem,' and are not reflective of the topic.

I found your poem too long in sentence structure. The inconsistent amount of words and lines throughout made it 'difficult' for me to read, as I found my attention wandering, my eyes skipping ahead.

As for the content, it came across to me as something from your heart, something which is held dearly within you. In my opinion, to write a 'good' poem, that one thing is most important over all else..it must come from the heart.

So, while I don't 'like' the poem per se, I applaud the intent..an expression of your deepest emotions.

Answer 7

You brought tears to my eyes sister. I'm a writer and it's fine. Having others read them is just what you have to do to catch typo's and other things.

Go over it again in a few days and catch the small things. Don't want to correct you on here.

Answer 8

I can not comment your faith, it is your choose and it is yours. A bout that poem....i have a long time to appreciating....and i`m enjoying very slowly. I think you have talent to reads or make poem....so what you waiting for?

Thankful that poem.
and have a nice day
Roberth M

Answer 9

I love the poem. Jehovah is an awesome Father and Friend. I am so glad that I can call him my Friend.

Answer 10

Thnx sis, u let all of us here inspired. A very nice poem.