The foolish ponder on a life of new.
the simple hope for what the wise know is hopeless.
All that lays in the past is the rubble of crushed hopes and what ifs.
The regret of past mistakes leads to new ones.
talk of a new is foolish, for In life their are somethings that cannot be redone.
2007-07-10 11:15:04 · 4 answers · asked by vengeance45458 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
This is a good poem ; and it makes you think about your life also...good job.,.
2007-07-10 14:37:20 · answer #1 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Basically it doesn't make any sense.
Poetic license can allow a certain amount of latitude but the poem has to have a foundation, a fundamental thought to give your reader.
Your poem is a list of five empty statements.
2007-07-10 21:36:03 · answer #2 · answered by Lorenzo H 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It sucks. I'm just kidding!!! Actually this is the best one I've read on this site (not saying much). But I really like it. However, for me I could do with more past tense (too much is, not enough was) but that's just my opinion.
2007-07-10 20:35:37 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
kind of jumbled but deep. i like it.
2007-07-10 19:00:09 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋