Would anyone like to read my story and tell me what you think?

Question

It centers around a male couple and the issues that they encounter in a homophobic highschool. Read as they battle through depression, self-loathing and abuse.

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2339606/1/

Answer 1

i will be honest with you, i did not read it, it is best that what you wrote would not put it on line to be read. this is because if you are thinking to publish this in the future someone could get your ideas and publish it first. it is best to copy-write your work, before showing it to anyone, that way you have the rights to your work.

Answer 2

As a successful gay author, I would LOVE to read your story. This link isn't working for me, so please send me your story some other way.
I am on messenger all day/night, just IM me and send me information on how to access this story and I will give you my PROFESSIONAL opinion.

I also teach creative writing at Columbia University, which should illustrate my astute observational tactics.

Thank you,
Love,
Snag

Answer 3

This is a tough topic to break into the market. You better find a GREAT hook. Check out the book "Running with Scissors" to see how it can be done.

Answer 4

I read the page that popped up ... didn't see the homophobic thing, is that later on? But the page I read was very well-written, only you should use pronouns like "she" and "they" more. Loved it, though, keep writing! =)

Answer 5

o, please too long, hope someone else assist