Your day went sour,
Everything went wrong.
The radio station of your life,
Seemed to skip your song.
So instead of changing the channel,
You want to cancel the show?
When you asked my opinion,
I said NO!
When you looked surprised,
I said NO! Let it flow.
Choose life,
It's the gift that you got for free.
Heartache and misery,
Won't last forever.
Neither does stormy weather.
So choose life,
Don't dwell on the yesterdays,
Or rewind the replays,
This Is Your Life,
Live it many ways.
But live!
For when you die you'll leave a space.
That will remain forever empty,
Cause YOU fill that place,
In my heart!
By Semper Fi 83
7/10/07
2007-07-10 10:16:08 · 18 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Yes, Who Cares I wrote it write before I posted it. Do you like it?
2007-07-10 10:27:54 · update #1
Can a brutha get an "Amen!"?
2007-07-10 10:19:30 · answer #1 · answered by Hot Coco Puff 7 · 14⤊ 0⤋
Choose a career
2016-05-18 22:36:54 · answer #2 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Amen! Hallelujah Jesus!
(we need a beatbox, bro)
2007-07-10 10:22:02 · answer #3 · answered by Dr. G™ 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I love everything except the title. I guess it's just a bit too ordinary for my taste. Sorry my critiques very rarely make sense.
2007-07-10 13:39:52 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
A surprise, really. One of the best things I've ever read. Keep it up!
2007-07-10 12:01:12 · answer #5 · answered by lyyman 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like it alot! If you wrote it for a friend, I'm sure you encouraged him with your positive view on life. Keep on writing!
2007-07-10 10:56:44 · answer #6 · answered by Joan H 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
That was nice...did you write that yourself? Yes, I like it. Good job!! I would give you 10 stars if I could.
2007-07-10 10:19:57 · answer #7 · answered by Liberal City 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
God has blessed you with a wonderful talent my friend keep it going. i really loved this one best of all i do believe, but i have not read all of them yet.
2007-07-11 01:41:28 · answer #8 · answered by TA 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
You got a web site with more stuff?
You get my vote.
Peace!
2007-07-10 10:24:33 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Very Biblical of you.....Great poem.
2007-07-10 11:44:40 · answer #10 · answered by Jan P 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Bravo. You need to have it published. Let us hear your other poems.
2007-07-10 10:39:01 · answer #11 · answered by mary 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋