(rest of poem continued again)) sorry bout that.
He must end it now or forever he’d cry
Out of her arm he pulled the long needle with care
Took one last long deep breath of the cool hospital air
So precisely he stuck that needle to his heart
But nobody noticed as he fell onto her cart
He had unintentionally killed the one that he loved
So he took his own life to rendezvous in the Heavens above.
i know its kinda deporessing, but is it good?
2007-07-10
06:44:30
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