Darkest of despair
It is of young lives lost of untold despair that you speak. How true a young heart that would know what it is to truly live, how could it know what it is to truly wallow. Life is short, let not the unknowing mind kill the body so young and yet to reach its prime.
Life bears no expiration labels that I know, let your body live that your mind might yet grow.
2007-07-10 01:03:30 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Philosophy
You can't please everyone nor should you set out to. Some see wisdom others see frivolous scriblings, wherein lies the true meaning, does the eye see and the mind not read?
2007-07-10 01:12:28 · update #1
good thoughts..just figure out how to tie them all together and you will have a winner!!
2007-07-10 03:35:43 · answer #1 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would give this an A, it is just as good as all the other high class poetry I have read. Maybe even make it the basis of a movie or novel.
2007-07-10 08:09:20 · answer #2 · answered by victorschool1 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
If I were still teaching, this would get a D - overwritten, needlessly obtuse, making no significant point whatsoever.
This ain't a pearl, it's a grain of sand with pretensions.
2007-07-10 08:06:52 · answer #3 · answered by Uncle John 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
We awake, we do some things, then we go back to sleep.
We repeat this until we repeat it no more.
Such is the fate of man kind.
2007-07-10 08:25:36 · answer #4 · answered by Floyd B 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Life does have expiration labels, we just can't read them.
2007-07-10 08:12:34 · answer #5 · answered by Beau R 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
What, when, where and why? Makes me dizzy, not that, that is a major acomplishment.
2007-07-10 17:06:42 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋