Sneaky Sarah
+Sneaky
+++Sarah
NotSoMeek
HangsRound
++Corners
++JustTo
++Peek
When
SheGets
ThereWhat
WillSheSee?
SetRoundThe
+++TableHer
++++Family
+WhatAre
+++They
Doing?
What
Will
They
Speak?
WhatWill
+SheHear?
+ThisGirlNot
++++++Meek.
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2007-07-09 15:10:22 · 11 answers · asked by ? 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Beyond description, nice artistic temperaments. Pretty hard work, but admiringly beautiful.
2007-07-17 09:32:11 · answer #1 · answered by Dr.Qutub 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Wonderfully done, not only good poetry, but a good "Carmen Figuraturum", or "Carmen Figuratum" as it's sometimes called: a poem that creates the shape of its subject with its words, spaces and/or characters.
This is especially well formed in that the choice of short word groups and words run together implies the compactness of "peeking", and the use of "plus's" implies 'female gender', so another bonus for that one!
Again, very well done!
2007-07-14 01:08:26 · answer #2 · answered by Kevin S 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I don't know but here is a poem to make you feel happy.
Born fragile, born sweet,
Into the hands of rings.
Born a monster, born elite.
A monster's fate is his beat,
Hes just begininng to learn instinctive things.
Born fragile, born sweet.
Now knowing secrets of the street,
This young prince has grown horned wings.
Born a monster, born elite.
Siring children is his next feat,
Heirs is what that brings.
Born fragile, born sweet.
He died shameful, he died defeat,
Death brings joy to the valley for it sings.
Born a monster, born elite.
Father dead, repeat, repeat
But 'tis the way of Royalty, but 'tis the way of kings.
Born Fragile,born sweet,
Born a monster, born elite.
2007-07-17 12:33:38 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Cute
2007-07-16 08:39:59 · answer #4 · answered by Elle.Morena 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like how you made the person with the way you wrote the poem.
2007-07-13 19:29:04 · answer #5 · answered by Argent 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Ha ha, the infamous Sarah. I know her well!
Check out my Yahoo! question, "A fun poem, please opine." Several other poets have used Sarah as a punching pag as well...
Nonethess, your poem is innovative, as all I have seen are.
Thumbs uppance!
2007-07-09 22:19:12 · answer #6 · answered by zmanjohn00 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
cute poem very innovative and creative!
Keep Writting!!
2007-07-12 06:12:07 · answer #7 · answered by Sh00ting_St@r! 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Love it, I always call it art poetry.
2007-07-16 22:01:02 · answer #8 · answered by Freebird-Robin 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Is this for a pop-up book?
2007-07-09 22:15:58 · answer #9 · answered by Ronnie 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Not really
2007-07-09 22:34:14 · answer #10 · answered by sweet_blue 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋