2007-07-09 07:40:56 · 16 answers · asked by Twiggy 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
Sadness sucks but depression is worse.
I've been through both, it's almost a curse.
I put on a smile to hide my true self,
But some people see through it _______
This is what i have so far. :(
2007-07-09 07:46:16 · update #1
Does this sound ok?
Sadness sucks but depression is worse.
I've been through both, it's almost a curse.
I put on a smile to hide my true self,
But some people see through it all by themselves.
They don't need help they can just tell
It's like beign an animal trapped in it's cell
This way that i feel it's hard to explain,
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U like it? or you can keep sending me ideas.
2007-07-09 07:55:16 · update #2
This is the final product unless anyone has anymore ideas.
Sadness sucks but depression is worse.
I've been through both, it's almost a curse.
I put on a smile to hide what's inside,
But some people see through it and can tell it's a lie.
They don't need help they can just tell,
It's like being an animal trapped a cell.
This way that i feel it's hard to explain,
I feel as though I am in chains.
I hate most all that I've done through the past,
I know I'm a kid but it's not been a blast.
I hate some of my life but some of it I like
And sometimes I wish that God would just strike.
2007-07-09 08:04:00 · update #3
http://rhymezone.com/
This website is awesome for rhymes!
2007-07-09 07:49:12 · answer #1 · answered by Lori 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
when writing poetry, try not to write yourself into a corner - the way you have your poem written you are looking for one magic word to fit into a specific place and it seems like you wrote yourself into a corner with only one possible solution. try rewording the rhyme before to give you more options... dont try to find the one magic word to finish a rhyme because it hardly ever fits the image or idea you are trying to portray... also, you can use "half rhymes" that dont rhyme completely, but sound similar. rappers do this all the time. look up "half rhymes" on wikipedia. there are lots of different ways to ryhme, by vowel sound, by consonant sound, by syllable...
2007-07-09 07:55:31 · answer #2 · answered by grrrl_56 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I put on a smile to hide how i feel
But some people see through it, they know it's not real
2007-07-09 08:20:06 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Okay, here goes:
1. bookshelf
2. delf
n. - An excavation
n. - A mine; a quarry; a pit dug; a ditch.
n. - Same as Delftware.
3. elf
4. herself
5. himself
6. hisself
7. itself
8. mantelshelf
n. - The shelf of a mantel
9. myself
10. nonself
11. oneself
12. ourself
13. pelf
n. - Informal terms for money
n. - Money; riches; lucre; gain; -- generally conveying the idea of something ill-gotten or worthless. It has no plural.
14. self
15. shelf
16. thyself
17. yourself
............fin.
2007-07-09 07:52:34 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Belt
2007-07-09 07:52:11 · answer #5 · answered by DanielleeA 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
chelf
delph
elf
helf
relf
relph
selph
shelf
2007-07-09 07:58:34 · answer #6 · answered by trina5254 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
But some people see thru it all
2007-07-09 07:50:16 · answer #7 · answered by fillyfloppy 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
i put on a smile to hide whats inside
but some people see that its all just a lie
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This way that i feel it's hard to explain,
it seems no one could understand all my pain
2007-07-09 07:58:23 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Healf if you are an Eastend cockney.
2007-07-09 07:44:57 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
pelf -
money, wealth, or riches, especially if obtained dishonestly (archaic)
I don't know how you'll work it into your poem, though.
2007-07-09 10:03:35 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋