Would a professial edit my story for free, please?

Question

I have a story that I have writen. I have read it many times. I know that there is many things to be done to it, but I don't know what. Can someone professial edit my story for me, please? IM me at realxdragonxfire and I'll send you the story. Please and thank you!

Answer 1

Ashley, why one earth would a professional do that when they could be editing for $25 or more an hour?

If you want feedback that will help you write better, rather than for someone to fix your mistakes without teaching you how to avoid them in the future, consider posting your work at a critique board. AbsoluteWrite.com/forums has the best ones I've found.

I hope to see you there, okay?