Okay, I'll just give you the outline. Davy Jones's Wife, Calypso, just turned into a vampire (Davy bit her) And now she's meeting an old friend of Davy,,,Lestat. So now, Calypso falls for him and sleeps with him...BEHIND DAVY'S BACK! Should she get caught? She she get pregnant with his child? Should she get blackmailed??? PLEASE GIVE ME YOUR IDEAS!!!
2007-07-08 07:43:57 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
interesting story line...
maybe should try some turning of events,
Lestat found dead and Calypso was then found next to the victim. Davy Jones was actually the murder, he knows about the affair but loves his wife too much...
but then dun release the truth till later so more suspends, as we try to get to see trials of the murder, and also maybe some scenes of Davy jones and Calypso quarrelling...
just a suggestion...
maybe they sail off to another deserted island in the end of the whole thing...
so good luck with the writting ...
tell me what u chose to happen in the end k, ;)
2007-07-09 03:28:17 · answer #1 · answered by yukie 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
She's a vampire. Vampires don't get pregnant. They're dead,remember? Unless they're like the miracle vamp baby born on the show "Angel" that he and Darla had. I think she should get caught, just not right away. A little touch and go is always interesting. And is Lestat a vamp too? Is he supposed to be like "the vampire Lestat" of the Anne Rice novels? Or is he supposed to be human? Maybe an old friend of Davy's that now knows what he is and has to kill him, but really doesn't want to?
2007-07-08 07:57:52 · answer #2 · answered by scarlettrhett 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Definitely blackmailed. That'll make her some type of tortured servant to Lestat. And I don't think vampires have babies ... She should be struggling with being blackmailed and finding a way to clear her record, you know?
By the way, this sounds like a really cool book. Romance and horror, right? Really great idea.
Good luck!
2007-07-08 08:01:58 · answer #3 · answered by xxWannabeWriterxx 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Blackmailed. Everything is predictable. MAKE IT UNPREDICTABLE. Do I need to repeat myself? It will get boring if something like getting caught happens. But... If she gets pregnant and has to make sure Davy doesn't kill him (or her) she has to run away... Well, you never know, do you?
2007-07-08 07:48:34 · answer #4 · answered by Emily 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds like a start of a good book what kind is it?
a romance? a horror? sci-fi?please send me more details about your book to panthor001@yahoo.com or just catch me on yahoo messenger under the same name panthor001
2007-07-08 07:52:13 · answer #5 · answered by panthor001 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋