1.As you may notice my transcript, I got an A in my English
2. As you may notice on my transcript, I got an A in my English
3. As you may notice in my transcript, I got an A in my English
2007-07-08 07:14:48 · 16 answers · asked by Katy T 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
Of the three, I am going to choose 3, but it is an unweildy sentence
2007-07-08 07:22:08 · answer #1 · answered by Experto Credo 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Number 3
2007-07-08 19:15:08 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Actually none of them are grammatically correct.
But No. 2 is the closest, I got is not proper english.
You should be saying it this way,
"As you may notice, I received an A on my English Transcript".
But if you insist on using your way of phrasing it, replace the word got with received and use your second choice and take out the word My, with it in there, it is a hanging phrase. It looks like it's missing the end of the sentence.
For example, "As you may notice on my transcript, I received an A in English".
The way you have it, you need more after the word English like the word Thesis and replace the word in with on for example to finish the sentence.
So "As you may notice on my transcript, I received an A on my English Thesis"
I hope this helps you.
2007-07-08 14:41:59 · answer #3 · answered by unknown friend 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
As you may notice on my transcript; I received an A in my English class.
2007-07-08 14:24:40 · answer #4 · answered by thefemalealphawolf 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
As you may have noticed on my transcript, I got an A in English.
...
If you got an A, shouldn't you know the answer to this question?
;)
2007-07-08 14:21:02 · answer #5 · answered by mcauslan 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
None of the above.
As you may notice from my transcript, I got an A in English.
And some people consider "got" to be too informal. They would say "received" or "earned" an A. In your case, probably the former.
2007-07-08 14:32:30 · answer #6 · answered by RE 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The second one is best; "on my transcript".
The third choice, "in my transcript" might also be acceptable. The first one is not correct at all.
2007-07-08 14:19:51 · answer #7 · answered by jackalanhyde 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No 2 , you received an A "on" your transcript, not "in" it.
BUT
You "received" (preferred over "got"), an A in English. "my" is not necessary, it's repetitious since you used "my transcript".
2007-07-08 14:26:41 · answer #8 · answered by ed 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
'on' means to be or remain supported by or suspended from.
'in' is used to indicate inclusion within something abstract.
Therefore your answer would be number 3 since you are including your grade in English in your transcript. :-)
Both words are prepositions.
2007-07-08 14:27:36 · answer #9 · answered by Catie I 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would go with #2. #1 just doesn't sound write and on #3 you can't be graded in something (unless it's like a subject i.e, English).
2007-07-08 14:25:54 · answer #10 · answered by Gadgetyman23 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋