This is the one I get the most feedback on...
The One
01-06-06
Thirty years old and still longing to find
The girl of my dreams, the one that is mine
I've been to the parties, the bars and the parks
I've given my money, my time and my heart
I thought it was this one, or that one, or her
But then afterall, I wasn't so sure
So where is this angel that God sent for me
The one that they said, we'd know when we meet
Did I miss her, did I know her, Is fate really true
Or did He forget about mine when he sent one to you
Or maybe she's coming a little bit late
Maybe awaiting the appropriate date
So what do I do, just wait 'til I'm old
Sleep in this bed all my life all alone
Or do I just settle for the first pretty girl
That smiles real big when I give her a twirl
A cozy warm bed seems easier to me
Even though she's not quite who I thought she would be
It all seems so hard, I can't get it straight
I'm tired of waiting for the hands of fate
2007-07-08 04:55:14 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I guess the stars know more than I'll ever see
I guess I'll just leave it to the powers that be
I hope I'm not busy the day that she comes
I don't think I will be if she's really the one
I believe that this waiting will be worth the time
For the girl of my dreams The One that is mine
2007-07-08 04:55:31 · update #1
Oh wow - that was SO nice
You have a great talent there !
Wish my man would right me poetry .... I get nothing like that - ever.
2007-07-08 16:02:07 · answer #1 · answered by • Koala • uʍop ɹǝpun 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Meatball I had no idea...you are a scholar and poet among men. Keep the faith and she will be there one day. That is one lucky girl when she does come along.
2007-07-08 12:08:54 · answer #2 · answered by Madam Naka 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I've never read any of your poems, but I like this one.
Good luck in finding her. She's probably looking for you too.
2007-07-08 12:09:59 · answer #3 · answered by ♥Derryboona♥ 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That was lovely
It really was
Don't worry, she'll turn up, just when you least expect it.
awww meatball your a big softie!!!
2007-07-08 12:02:02 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Never
2007-07-08 12:01:46 · answer #5 · answered by Terry C. 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
you should really try and publish your poems, I have read them, and they just need a little editing. but they are really great !!! :)
2007-07-08 12:01:42 · answer #6 · answered by Mee~mOe~ 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Haven't read any till now... that's good!
2007-07-08 11:59:03 · answer #7 · answered by mnmz4lyf 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That's deep.
2007-07-08 12:00:30 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's good actually.
2007-07-08 11:59:57 · answer #9 · answered by Buddy Hodor 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
You know it's my favorite.
2007-07-09 14:27:41 · answer #10 · answered by Destiny 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋