Sometimes i can't go to sleep at night,
Is it because youre not by my side,
All i have to do is close my eyes,
And there's youre face in my sight,
Im afraid to go to bed at night,
What if you're not there to tuck me in,
You're not there to hold me tight,
Let me enjoy this beautiful sin,
By spending the night in your arms,
This is my little paradise,
Just you and me for eternity,
Staring into your deep brown eyes,
A goodnight kiss is all i need,
And to my fears i pay no heed,
I'm afraid to step in to bed at night,
What if you're not there tonight,
If you've left me all by myself,
With only your pictures on my shelf,
I stand on the doorstep,
And i close my eyes,
I picture myself in our paradise,
I fall asleep with your smile on my mind,
And i hope when i wake up its you that i find!
2007-07-07 16:16:34 · 13 answers · asked by haz23412 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
too sappy
2007-07-12 08:58:13 · answer #1 · answered by Ink Corporate 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow I could kiss you just hearing the lyrics. It sounds really nice and the deeper meaning of each individual line brings the listener further intoo your melody. Keep em coming!!!
2007-07-14 03:26:34 · answer #2 · answered by sudokisan 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
wow. you are a really great song writer. I love the meaning and how deep this song is. To me it sounds like you are expressing oyur true feelings. I also love the way it makes you picture what you are going through.
Very deep and great imagery!
2007-07-15 13:55:10 · answer #3 · answered by Kaylee 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Shes Taylor fast it incredibly is how she does it! in case you particularly intend to make songs like hers, in basic terms convey your self on slightly paper. Its gonna be alongside time formerly you would be like Taylor fast via fact shes been writing songs on the grounds that she became little. your no longer gonna like the 1st song you write anyhow so in basic terms open your self up and write something down! finally you will get some thing which you will like! wish this helped..
2016-09-29 07:10:38 · answer #4 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the song is comtemporary and simple. And i am looking forward to it put to a music like the song "unwell" or "Is it OK if i call you mine?"
and this song is best listened to when taking a long trip going to memphis or great canyon park.
2007-07-12 16:21:57 · answer #5 · answered by bukayo 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Hey that song completely rocks!!!
In this case instead of lol its SOL sing out loud! Awesome job,love it!!!! Keep Writting more specacular songs, i really want to read them u could email em to me!
2007-07-12 23:25:45 · answer #6 · answered by Sh00ting_St@r! 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Who are you talking about? Your Mom or Your Wife
2007-07-13 05:57:14 · answer #7 · answered by Argent 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
thats really good i love it keep writing songs cause you have a career in it
2007-07-07 16:20:54 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I am not much of a judger of music but it was ok
2007-07-07 16:21:14 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
i like it a lot. i am sure that it would even sound better with music! rock on! i like it!!! go you! lol
no seriously.. it rocks
2007-07-07 16:21:44 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
its very nice, it would nice to hear it with music .well done keep at it. good luck.
2007-07-14 01:26:56 · answer #11 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋