My Sweet
Cotton candy,
Licorice whips,
Pecan ice cream,
and chocolate chips
All these things
I love to chew
Are only half
As sweet as you.
2007-07-07 14:43:18 · 11 answers · asked by Duncan w ™ ® 7 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I think it's too sweet..... maybe a bit of well placed tragedy would perk it up.
2007-07-07 14:54:43 · update #1
Can I change pecan ice cream to praline ice cream? That would be sweeter.
2007-07-07 18:15:41 · update #2
(I wonder if anyone will pick up on the idea that the protagonist might possibly be a cannibal)
2007-07-08 03:17:03 · update #3
You sound hungry.
2007-07-07 18:41:47 · answer #1 · answered by Todd 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sweet like a romantic dream. the person to whom is adressed to will be delighted!
2007-07-08 08:55:52 · answer #2 · answered by chrisvoulg1 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Whew!
So sweet that my cavities reaapeared.
Nice however, like a valentine's day card.
2007-07-07 21:51:45 · answer #3 · answered by Legandivori 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think its great! Its simple, cute, sweet but I dont think its to sweet. Very well done!
2007-07-08 00:21:42 · answer #4 · answered by cave wmn 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Have you considered working for Hallmark? Pax - C
2007-07-07 21:48:16 · answer #5 · answered by Persiphone_Hellecat 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Yes. That's very sweet!
2007-07-07 21:50:29 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 1⤋
Very
2007-07-07 21:50:59 · answer #7 · answered by Lindsay Jane 6 · 2⤊ 1⤋
its cute to send a card that said that to a sweetie or something,
but its kindof valintinezy....
2007-07-07 22:25:35 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
did u get that off a popsicle stick?
2007-07-07 22:04:49 · answer #9 · answered by i♥ rupert grint 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
that is the sweetest thing ever did your kid send that to you
2007-07-07 21:49:22 · answer #10 · answered by Lovergurl 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋