Atop the Lonely Mountain, it's finally raining.
The drought has been rough, the villagers complaining.
And I will just bet
You'll like to get wet
And not bother any explaining.
This dragon can take a small hint
When a dear madam's message is sent.
Fair maidens will play
And be carried away
When the dragon has used a breath mint.
That grouchy old knight just can't go.
He's not welcome in the Lonely Mountain, you know.
On the dance floor we'll hang
And shake our groove thang
And snuggle when the music gets slow.
2007-07-07 07:00:48 · 15 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Yippee! We cheer!
The Rain man is Here!
To freshen the grass
'tween our toes.
A trip to the mountain
in sunshine or not...
Is all about Billy...
the knights they can rot.
My hints have been heard
with no use of word
Showing dragons are smart...
not just hot.
2007-07-07 07:11:39 · answer #1 · answered by Madam Naka 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Kind of cute really A bit awkwardly constructed. I love the idea of the dragon sucking on breath mints. Were they Altoids perhaps? But I wonder how he keeps them from the line of fire, so to speak? Lord and Ladies don't shake their groove thangs. Not in public anyhow.Keep at it, though. because you have something there. And besides, I just LOVE dragons! Questions: who is the Madam, and why isn't the Knight welcome? And can the dragon bring back the rain?
2007-07-07 07:15:36 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
As the music recedes,
the fair maidens heart bleeds.
The dragon it's breathe so sour,
had her crying for over an hour.
And the knight his poor dancing concedes.
2007-07-07 07:11:43 · answer #3 · answered by Doona 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Lovely poetry! Ha Ha! Good poem.
2016-05-20 22:58:37 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Imagine. Once the old knight fought dragons, saving fair ladies, true love and heroism ...now this.
Wtf happened?
2007-07-07 07:12:54 · answer #5 · answered by Ands 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Oh this one is sure to touch the ladies hearts once more. You're the man Billy Boy!!!!!!!!!
2007-07-07 07:04:43 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 4⤊ 0⤋
Thank you, Billy. I try to find all of your poems because I really like them. They always brighten my day.
2007-07-07 07:14:11 · answer #7 · answered by Breezey is saying HAPPY BIRTHDAY 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
How beautiful!! You just improved my mood Billy.
Thank You.♥
2007-07-07 07:03:46 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
I agree with Sweet. You do it every time, Billy; take a hard day and somehow lighten the load. Thanks BB.
2007-07-07 14:04:48 · answer #9 · answered by PJPeach 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful. I love it.
2007-07-07 09:10:16 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋