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You have shown me I am safe to fully be myself with you, and share my feelings.

I think its grammatically correct but I want to make it sound better. want to use another word in place of shown, is shown or showed right, and don't know if I need to use "with you" but would sentence sound right without it? This sentence is in response to my boyfriend 33 responding and being understanding what is bothering me. Please revise this with right grammar even though it is probably right, thanks

2007-07-06 19:24:35 · 6 answers · asked by simplemiss71 1 in Education & Reference Words & Wordplay

I DO NOT want to use word shown.

2007-07-06 19:36:29 · update #1

6 answers

You have made me feel comfortable to share my feelings and fully be myself with you.

2007-07-06 19:35:35 · answer #1 · answered by Ela Abdul 2 · 0 0

You have shown me I am safe to fully be myself with you, and share my feelings

What about:
You make me feel safe and have shown me that I can be myself with you.

Or Make it two seperate sentences:
I feel safe with you. I know that can be myself when I am around you.

2007-07-07 02:35:51 · answer #2 · answered by EvArtD 3 · 0 0

with you should be at the end:
You have shown me I am safe to fully be myself and share my feelings with you.
or
You have shown me I am safe to fully be myself; to share my feelings with you.

2007-07-07 02:30:47 · answer #3 · answered by JasonVorhees 1 · 0 0

You have shown me I am safe to fully be myself with you, and share my feelings

How about...?

You have proven to me that I will be perfectly safe when i'm with you and when i share with you my feelings.

2007-07-07 02:30:17 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Perhaps minor adjustments:

You have shown me that I am safe to fully be myself and share my feelings with you.

Okay - change that:

I am comfortable fully sharing my feelings with you.

2007-07-07 02:36:40 · answer #5 · answered by Princess Picalilly 4 · 0 0

Thank you for providing me with the security in you to enable me to share my feelings and be myself with you

2007-07-07 02:36:19 · answer #6 · answered by yangargo 3 · 0 0

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