is it any good or wot?
oh woe shalt brimstone pith haveth thee tyme one fairest do
cause roger me tumbles no doubteth thee
o'maiden squarer than thy fair forth entwistled
thee devinee comed unto onto aswell as behathin a pee
hush fer tyme is te no avail or able gluttn n'or sloth
FIN-THE END
2007-07-06 18:42:58 · 17 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
well.. wot do you think?
2007-07-06 19:27:44 · update #1
dont undwerstabnd a word
2007-07-06 18:44:41 · answer #1 · answered by bobravers 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
the choice of stanza format is interesting, it flows as if it is meant to be spoken which fits nicely in with the concept. Personally, love poems leave a sappy taste on my palate; a flavor I do not care for. Hopefully I will soften and be able to write love poetry as well as conversations with demon. I suppose strength is found in recognizing weakness. You have found me in a pensive mood
2016-05-20 04:04:11 · answer #2 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It seems like you have tried to ye old English but even in it's written form it doesn't make sense, unless it's a nonsensical poem, I'd say it's not very good IMHO.
Sai's Poetic Scale:
3.5/10
2007-07-07 08:48:23 · answer #3 · answered by Sai~ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like a fair maiden needs to use the bathroom.
2007-07-06 18:52:08 · answer #4 · answered by D 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Brilliant! Chaucer and Rabbie Burns eat your heart out!
2007-07-10 01:49:56 · answer #5 · answered by Gothmog 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Might be something, there, as a STARTING POINT, - in the way, of Robbie Burns, - but, - as you asked for my opinion, - it COULD do with some tidying up!
Keep trying, though, - GREAT start!
2007-07-07 01:37:47 · answer #6 · answered by Spike 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Have you ever had to sit through a friends poems? And after you're pressured to tell them you like it? Well, I don't know you so I don't have to lie. Don't torture your friends into reading this and them leaving them no choice but to tell you it's good. Cuz they'd be lying.
2007-07-06 18:46:15 · answer #7 · answered by Matt 2 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Enger-lish is hard, you see
Words, segments, and sentence ease
It's harder still, on beer and pills,
And reefer makes it even worse
I suggest you put these down,
Before you work on complex verse
2007-07-06 23:22:26 · answer #8 · answered by TD Euwaite? 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I like it
2007-07-08 07:17:55 · answer #9 · answered by : 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
umm im sure it would be good if i could understand it
2007-07-06 19:51:06 · answer #10 · answered by A.J. 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋