Are there lyrics good to start a song?
The song title would be:Never there.
It's a rainny day outside
And youre nowhere to be found
My tears just keep on falling now
There is no way to stop them no.
I keep on looking
But it's endles
This searching seems
Seems soo endles...
And the rest I will write when I make it up.
Thanks.Oh,can you rate those lyrics,from 1-5,please?
Thanks again.
2007-07-06 09:14:54 · 10 answers · asked by ? 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music ➔ Lyrics
you could add this to the end of the first "verse", if you want...
if only you were there, to wath me cry...
cos you're never there, even when i smile...
you're just never there.
then on with the next verse. i'll rate it when i see the full song, but its not a bad start at all!
2007-07-06 22:42:58 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
5
2007-07-06 09:40:22 · answer #2 · answered by ashley<3 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Miss Luna, Well I would change line 4 "down to the cold wet ground"
2007-07-06 11:14:28 · answer #3 · answered by lonewolf 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The words arent bad but im not sure of the beat it would have. So i guess id give it a 3.
2007-07-06 09:57:04 · answer #4 · answered by kandy 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-01 01:03:28 · answer #5 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Meh. 2
2007-07-06 09:20:14 · answer #6 · answered by Damn Sarge 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
the song sounds kind of cliche. i don't know. it needs to be more original. I'd give it a 2 out of 5.
2007-07-06 09:18:50 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
id say a 4!
2007-07-06 09:26:01 · answer #8 · answered by !V@nZw@Y! 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
A 6. Off the chart baby, OFF THE CHART.
2007-07-06 09:21:27 · answer #9 · answered by iammessi 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
probably a 4 !
good work!
2007-07-06 09:24:38 · answer #10 · answered by ilovedance44 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋