we all transform into somthing better than who we really are
won't take you far
some of us are saints
others are sinners
we think we are all losers
in my opinion we are all winners
some to protect and serve
learning on our own curve
some destined to be evil
cuz some wont be civil
some get decepted and decieve
others try to believe
everything lies within
the battle within living in sin
others stand
some retreat in defeat
when the glove is off and look under the mask
its not that hard of a task
we all can be something better
the greatest challenge is us
or we will all fall to dust
do not let the days go by
we are all more than meets the eye.
2007-07-05 17:16:15 · 6 answers · asked by sweetnstubbornsensitive 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
The heart which always holds
a transcendental view
will in time win the gold
with a past and future hue
to color the present.
2007-07-06 05:04:50 · answer #1 · answered by goodness 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful poem
I give you many kudos for the effort and feeling which you put into your works.
I encourage you to embark upon a journey and find the man who wrote this *within yourself*and become a writer.
Blessings and love,
Marina
2007-07-06 12:46:43 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love poems and i love this one...ive been trying for ever to write a poem to my bf but im just not a good poet :( but its very good!
2007-07-05 18:51:54 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice work, I like it. Thank You for sharing.
2007-07-05 17:21:42 · answer #4 · answered by kayboff 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it and you gave me an idea to write on ill sned it to you on myspace
2007-07-05 17:31:29 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
that's AWESOME and OUTSTANDING
2007-07-05 17:20:59 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋