Judas, my father
Why do I bother
Trying to bond
And make you feel fond
Of the son you don't want.
Judas, my Dad
It makes me so sad
you don't care for,
no why, how, or wherefore
the son you don't want.
Judas, my pop
It's not jazz or hip-hop
It's truly the blues
The saddest of hues
From the son you don't want.
2007-07-05 15:19:53 · 20 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
For that lovely poems I give you, from 1 to 10, a perfect 10.
Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!
2007-07-05 16:54:07 · answer #1 · answered by conde_c_b 7 · 2⤊ 1⤋
You should be a poet and begin to write some more poems.
I recommend that you should start writting them out and when you have a collection them you can go to a publisher and have him publish all of your poems for you.
2007-07-05 23:56:44 · answer #2 · answered by soar_2307 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Wow, that is touching. I am really sad now. Judas has some explaining to do. And now i am going to have nightmares tonight about broken families...
2007-07-05 22:22:49 · answer #3 · answered by Kiss My Shaz 7 · 3⤊ 4⤋
Bravo, Puddles!!
2007-07-05 22:22:23 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 3⤋
It sad and short
but you still did a good job
2007-07-05 22:25:21 · answer #5 · answered by jobees 6 · 1⤊ 3⤋
its really nice. i like it. its kinda sad but poems are usually sad .sorry about your dad. mines not around much either you just have to take day by day and thank god for the life you do have.
:D
god bless you!
2007-07-05 22:23:06 · answer #6 · answered by .Fearless. 4 · 3⤊ 3⤋
Funny...sad...the answers here are so confusing.
But I got a smile out of it.
2007-07-05 22:30:24 · answer #7 · answered by Skatermomof5 7 · 2⤊ 3⤋
I think it's wonderful! But, you know your daddy won't understand any of that, right!? He's just not the brightest crayon in the box!
2007-07-05 22:26:12 · answer #8 · answered by a_r_coolBLAH! 4 · 2⤊ 5⤋
Very much
2007-07-05 22:21:39 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 3⤋
Bahaha!That is hilarious...You did a great job.
Your daddy will be proud :D
2007-07-05 22:26:44 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 3⤋