I'm trying to think what I have done,
To make you leave me in this empty closet.
Is it because I've made your life so miserable?
Or is because I won't tell you what makes me so lonely?
Like when I've poured my eyes out,
You wouldn't even come near me.
Listen, I need you in my life,
And I would do anything to make you love me.
If I committee suicide,
Will you be at my funeral,
Crying your heart out,
Asking your self,
"Why did I leave her?"
Or would you stay home,
And celebrate my death.
You would probably celebrate my death.
Because you hate me so damn much.
Why do you hate me?
Why did you leave me?
Even through you're a boy,
That doesn't mean
That girls like me have pain inside, too.
I have pain inside.
I have more pain than you.
You ask me
Why I have more pain?
Well, all my life,
I lived with backstabbers.
I tell people something
And they change the story
And tell everyone.
Also, because I'm bisexual,
People don't want to hang around me.
2007-07-05 11:03:27 · 10 answers · asked by Ashley M 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Also, I wear all black,
So people assume I cut,
I cut because people are too busy judging me
And I have no one to talk to about my problems
Also, I have an eating disorder
Because of all you mother *******.
So I lay here,
In this empty closet,
Waiting for death to do it's part.
2007-07-05 11:03:47 · update #1
This is not true. I do not want to committe suicide. I was just really angry at the time and writing poety settles me down.
2007-07-05 11:18:45 · update #2
It has a certain neurotic quality to it.
2007-07-05 11:11:51 · answer #1 · answered by Ronnie 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Maybe I presume too much...if so, I apologize...But this strikes me as more of a cry for help than a work of poetry.
I do hope that writing this served as an outlet and helped somehow to make you feel better, 'getting it all out' on the page can be a healing thing.
That being said....
Look inside yourself for the strength to heal and to feel better about yourself...unless they are paid professionals (therapists and such) people in general are not caring or kind enough to help you with your pain....when you find the strength within yourself...others will flock to that strength.
Looking to others for your strength invites more pain.
Chin up girl...Be well and find your strength! :
2007-07-05 11:31:40 · answer #2 · answered by Chance M 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is always a good poem if it helps make you feel better. I'm a very happy person by nature, but sometimes I need to write down sad or dark things. It helps get out the bad feelings. Well done. :)
2007-07-05 11:34:16 · answer #3 · answered by kaakemousie 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Two words: Emotional intelligence
2007-07-05 11:16:42 · answer #4 · answered by INFINITE CONSCIOUSNESS 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Poetry is a good way to express your feelings. Great poem. Life sucks.
2007-07-05 11:24:27 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it..its kinda Like...turning your existence around thinking approximately it. discovering to alter issues for the and appreciating what stable they are in a position to deliver you and how they are in a position to benefit you. Its very stable and that i cant wait to work out greater of your artwork. Very advantageous and inspiring. It cuases you to think of approximately your existence unquestionably, and to work out in case you could desire to alter something.
2016-09-29 03:52:32 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
honestly, in my humble opinion this is not a poem. it is more of an open letter for that someone who has left you.
2007-07-05 13:54:10 · answer #7 · answered by ladyluck 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
deep
must have been emotional for u to write this.
saddens me actually.
2007-07-05 11:09:42 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
committee suicide?
all those in favor? all those against?
2007-07-05 11:15:30 · answer #9 · answered by leesa 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
please get help. you're really scaring me.
2007-07-05 11:14:42 · answer #10 · answered by ♫Kelsey♫ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋