Okay i have a plan for what the events will be in my novel, but im still looking for new ones, so far my book is a chapter of addies point of view (my main charecter and is a girl), and then one chapter of her crush, and her brothers best friend, at first he(the brother) doesn't like whats happening between them because he will have less time with his best friend ( addies crush, or boyfriend.) i want them addie and the boyfriend to become together after sharing a kiss,,,where should they have this kiss, and where should there relation ship become crush to going out? and how should it work.
2007-07-04 20:52:11 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
Before you start writing a novel, you should always have a detailed plot outline to work from. Also, it is a good idea to have detailed character sketches. You need to know your characters and what motivates them to do what they do.
As the author, you should already know where they kiss, why they kiss and when the relationship becomes something more than a "crush." You should know how it works out.
If you have to ask for help at this point, you are not ready to write a novel.
Also, based on reading your question, it might be a good idea for you to enroll in creative writing classes. Your basic composition skills seem to be lacking. No publisher will take you serious unless your writing and story telling abilities are superior.
Good luck.
2007-07-05 03:22:17 · answer #1 · answered by I_hope_I_know 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
So you're seeking help on how your main character's little girl crush on her brother's best friend evolves from it's awkward adolescent beginnings to something a bit more mature....perhaps becomming real love.
No writer--event the current hot shot ones--can pinpoint how such a romantic scene should really go. Love is a crapshoot gamble, basically---and you got to take your own best idea on this matter......and back it up.
My idea on it: Given the reader is playing in their mind the movie to your work.....the kiss should be somewhere discreetly hidden--where the two stole some time to be together. For a first kiss, we see the awkwardness....and the very rapid evolving of that very kiss going from awkard....to hot--fast; a kiss to show the reader that hey: girls like to f*ck too. After all : girls are human and what's wrong w/ showing, to some classy degrees, that they too have lustful urges????
2007-07-05 04:08:50 · answer #2 · answered by Mr. Wizard 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I would place the kiss in a totaly unexpected enviroment. Where you dont expect people to kiss. like a court.
This story seams a little bit wag yet. Have you done your outline propebly?
Ask yourself: Where should this story end? And what is the way to get there from wherewer it beginns?
Johan.
2007-07-05 05:02:12 · answer #3 · answered by Johan from Sweden 6 · 0⤊ 2⤋
i hope your prose is better than your question asking because you shouldn't need to keep telling us (in brackets) which character your talking about. where they kiss depends on where you set your novel but somewhere that has meaning like the first kiss should do.
2007-07-05 04:23:51 · answer #4 · answered by archie. 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I feel like I just read this question somewhere else.
Am I having a flashback?
Ontario is nice this time of year.
Love,
Snag
2007-07-05 06:17:37 · answer #5 · answered by snaggle_smurf 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
they should kiss on her brothers bed!
2007-07-05 03:56:42 · answer #6 · answered by jamel_saves 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋