i wrote this song/rap. it still needs some work. but tell me wut u think bout it.
girl why u gotta lie to me
its clear to see
u said u loved me
u said i was your special guy
but it was all a lie
u broke my heart
i cant believe that we're apart
dont u remember what ive done for u
i thought u were my love i thought u were my boo
remember when i took u everywhere
i even played with your hair
but i guess that u didnt care
remeber kissing by your locker
and that dude that messed with u i beat that motha f*ucka
i miss putting my hand down your back pocket
girl remember for your birthday i got u that heart-shaped locket
i even bought u that ring
but i guess it didnt mean a thing
and when u thought that u were pregnant
i said we woulda made perfect parents
i called u everynight
girl this just isnt right
u know im the only dude
that can put up with your attitude
but now your with someone else
and i just feel like beating up myself
2007-07-04 07:25:43 · 12 answers · asked by Lil' Jake 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
i loved u night and day
and all my homies say
that i should let it go
just go with the flow
that your a worthless b*tch
like and evil witch
a piece of sh*t
but i cant do it
i never hurt u
u know its true
so go ahead and be with that loser
i guess someone else will have to have Jacob junior
2007-07-04 07:27:36 · update #1
hahaha, loves it, it's really good, but I'm laughing cause i tried to rap it, haha I'm too white small to rap haha, but i liked it, did you write it based on an experience or just because?
2007-07-05 05:50:24 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its quite good! I like the start especially!!!!!!!!
2007-07-04 07:32:12 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice...I liked it alot
2007-07-04 07:32:32 · answer #3 · answered by ♥Tiffany 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
AWWW
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cute i luv i luvv
best of luck. my wishes to ya.!!
2007-07-04 14:31:58 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats hella good
2007-07-04 07:30:55 · answer #5 · answered by *MaNgO* 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
almost as good as eminem
2007-07-04 07:30:36 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it! =)
2007-07-04 07:29:32 · answer #7 · answered by Sunshine 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
well-written
2007-07-04 07:28:49 · answer #8 · answered by Mag 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
umm... to be honest its nott the best.. sorry i feel reeli bad!!!! :(
2007-07-04 07:29:49 · answer #9 · answered by SPiDeRs 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Nice...I liked it. :D
2007-07-04 12:42:50 · answer #10 · answered by basketballgirl 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋