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Don't Be A Stranger

Though the light shines bright
You will not enter
Why do you stand afar off
In the darkness
Is there a pain that hinders
Or is rebellion your only freedom
Does chaos reign in the intricacies
And is order just a weak realm
Will the love you seek
Be found in the dark mist
For you were issued from light
But you resist to return
If eyes do not lie
Then view mine
And find some measure
Of truth, logic and love
A shadowy step
I offer you to climb
So that your brightness
Will be brighter than mine

2007-07-03 13:01:17 · 5 answers · asked by ignoramus_the_great 7 in Arts & Humanities Poetry

5 answers

beautiful
you should copyright your work so that no one can steal it!

2007-07-03 13:09:17 · answer #1 · answered by L0V3_$T0N3D 3 · 0 0

Marvelous. Marry me?

2007-07-03 20:39:10 · answer #2 · answered by Human Nature 2 · 0 0

good but some spelling problems

2007-07-03 20:08:56 · answer #3 · answered by smile4chezze 2 · 0 0

Its very nice

2007-07-03 20:45:27 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

very goog

2007-07-03 20:05:24 · answer #5 · answered by kitty 2 · 0 0

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