while you're all alone when I got locked up I felt the rage for the world like a a hurricane Caleb
2007-07-02 17:47:50 · 5 answers · asked by flapper 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
It's a poem of someone maybe a teenager who is crying out to the world to feel sorry for him for being stupid yet he doesn't realize how stupid he is. He is enraged with himself but is channeling it to the world because he doesn't realize it is only himself. his rage keeps circling around and around unable to find it's home. it destroys everything in it's path until the size of the earth runs it down to nothing but a faint breeze.
2007-07-02 19:07:58 · answer #1 · answered by duwbryd 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
While you were all alone, I got locked up. I felt rage for the word like a hurricane.
Caged in spirit yet to roam I could not
As a hurricane in power and rage
That you were alone from me
Would the world I destroy
That cover it?
2007-07-03 07:38:01 · answer #2 · answered by Lorenzo H 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It sounds to me like a person in an emotional state of anger, confusion, and feeling locked up in someone elses world. The anger to me sounds like they are blaming the world for a mistake made that led to this persons downfall.
2007-07-03 01:15:53 · answer #3 · answered by Gabe 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's certainly dark and deep. It appears more to be an incarcerated (either literally or figuratively as in emotionally locked up) person's fear for a person left behind, and anger at the world for putting put him there.
2007-07-03 01:01:50 · answer #4 · answered by Darke Angel 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm not sure where one line ends and the next begins, but it sounds like it's about pint-up rage that confuses our protagonist.
2007-07-03 01:02:32 · answer #5 · answered by Thendens 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋