any managers out there? can you review my resume and give suggestions!?

Question

My name and info of course @ top

Objective:
To explore a new career that will allow me the opportunity to grow with the company.

Qualifications:
I have excellent customer service skills, I enjoy working with people and I have a very positive attitude.

Education:
Dobson High School Mesa, Az. 2001-2003

Relevant Experience:
Alliance Residential, Biscayne Bay apartments
Leasing Consultant, 09/2006-02/2007

-Toured apartments to our prospects and maintained a closing ratio of 30% or higher.
-Ran credit checks, verifications and necessary clerical work.
-Handled all resident issues in a professional matter.

Mark Taylor Residential, San Cierra apartments
Leasing Consultant, 12/2005-09/2006

-Toured apartments to our prospects and maintained a closing ratio of 30% or higher.
-Ran credit checks, verifications and necessary clerical work.
-Handled all resident issues in a professional matter.

(the rest wont fit!, see my additional notes)

Real Estate partners, Aventerra at Dobson Ranch apartments
Leasing Consultant, 07/2005-12/2005

-Toured apartments to our prospects and maintained a closing ratio of 30% or higher.
-Ran credit checks, verifications and necessary clerical work.
-Handled all resident issues in a professional matter.


References furnished upon request

Answer 1

I was a Community Manager for several years.. I would change up your duties on each job.. although they of course were similar that goes with out saying.. for example was one of them a Lease Up property? did you increase renewals or focus on resident rention on an older property?

Also I am curious why you were a leasing agent at three differnt properties in that amount of time.. maybe you could ellobrate on that.. moved on to larger project etc..

It would be better to use more "hot button" words for the job you are wanting to get.. like what kind of software do they use.. Rent Roll, MRI etc.. a Manager loves hiring someone who is already familar with the software!

Best of luck

Answer 2

Your jobs all look identical so the only job you will be offered is an identical job. I would make the objective different maybe to get a job in a mortgage company towards my long term goal of being a mortgage broker.
Also change qualifications to list specific things you can do like all the MSFT office products you know and any other software you can use.
Move the education to below the jobs. Finishing high school is expected. List any college you have started or the one you will start in the fall.
Do plan to attend college even if you only take one class at a time you can put you are working on a degree in something. Pick a subject like accounting or HR or office machines or software. You don't have anything to get any job but what you already have.

Answer 3

You have not said what kind of position you are looking for. Is it real estate or office/clerical work?

Answer 4

you need to make yourself stand out. try to tell in your resume, how and why you were able to achieve a 30% closing ratio.

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