when the wind was blowing and the leaves were flying out of the dry. I saw my neighbors down the street talking about something that must of been of importance. My dog was running around like there was ants biting him and I saw a bird crap on my car. The wind was picking up and dirt was swiftly been relocated to an area that nobody knows about. Rain started falling when all of a sudden a big crash of thunder and lightning nearly scared me half to death. I couldn't believe that rain was falling on a day when no rain was even in the forecast. I was going to bar-b-que but since it was now raining it was no longer in my plans. I swifty walked across the yard stomping on poor innocent sunflowers that were in my path. Mud was starting to form in parts of my yard that I didn't venture into very often. My new boots were getting soaked and I couldn't believe my stupidity for almost ruining them. With that said, I have no questions. Just a very interesting short story for all of you guys.
2007-07-02 15:56:57 · 11 answers · asked by Mr. Boombastic 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
weirdo...
edit: let me rephrase...weirdos...
2007-07-02 16:00:52 · answer #1 · answered by ? 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Nice story
2007-07-02 22:59:30 · answer #2 · answered by Lovely unicorn 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
u have a knack for writing, an ability to pull a reader into the plot with an eloquent brush. pursue ur career in writing. u'll flourish.
2007-07-02 23:00:45 · answer #3 · answered by naj.ss86 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
this is the best short story i ever read in my life. Gay people write so well
2007-07-02 23:00:23 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
I was going to say you asked and answered any dam question you might have had...Good story though:)
2007-07-02 23:01:27 · answer #5 · answered by overall:)3 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Thats what happens every time my in-laws are in town (just kidding) want more.
2007-07-02 23:01:37 · answer #6 · answered by ? 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
i agree with deble_2000, u shuld get published! very interesting story :)
2007-07-02 23:06:41 · answer #7 · answered by agalicktourq 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Put it to music. Have it orchestrated.
Rose P.
2007-07-02 23:07:18 · answer #8 · answered by rose p 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
And all of this happens in how many seconds of time? :-)
2007-07-02 22:59:18 · answer #9 · answered by americansneedtowakeup 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
thanks....you should be published!
2007-07-02 22:59:13 · answer #10 · answered by deb 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋