What do you think of this short poem?

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What do you think of this short poem?

Whevever happened to the joy this town held---seems that every good has been felled---now the sun with it's satirical grin---burns my soul as each day begins----you can't say we didn't try---soI just called to say goodbye.

2007-06-30 04:27:46 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry

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This is nice artwork, strong prose, expressive. Cool.

2007-06-30 05:34:25 · answer #1 · answered by TD Euwaite? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋

i loved it,
it was good short and to the point
lovely

2007-06-30 11:32:09 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋

good i liked it

2007-06-30 11:31:16 · answer #3 · answered by nisha10mabry 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋