Cruse through hood the when your driven but look for a siren.
Cause Cops all look like hopheads yeah why aren’t they dead!
They better run before I think you’re all done.
I put some lead in your head after you said your dumb ****.
Here come gunshots for you and your politic robots.
There isn’t one that’ll run when you pull your punk ass gun.
B*** my trigger fingers got an itch.
2007-06-29 03:40:04 · 9 answers · asked by Flame guru 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music ➔ Rap and Hip-Hop
hell naw take yo white azz bak 2 school
2007-06-30 03:56:17 · answer #1 · answered by flawdaboi561305 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
umm ... lol... not i hope i dont offend you or maybe ur playin around but i think u should just stik to crusing in hoods and dont become a rapper ... sorry needs a lot of work and it sounds like most of the songs out all u needed was a two step in it
2007-06-29 04:40:55 · answer #2 · answered by nichelle v 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
There alright but they also need alot of work. But at least you got it started. So keep writing and rhyming, and it will come to you naturally....
2007-06-29 06:00:58 · answer #3 · answered by Da Jedi 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
no they dont have lyricall quality. listen to some real hip hop like aceyolone for instance. hes a good start. to make your rhymes more intricate.
2007-06-29 09:31:41 · answer #4 · answered by juelz_10304 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
umh umh not relly but thats only my opinion i bet other people like it!
2007-06-29 05:58:06 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
please, what u need to do is stay in school and if ure done with school, go back there agin coz your sentences are just not coherent.
2007-06-29 04:47:12 · answer #6 · answered by DaWoman 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
WAT?!! i cant even read this rap.... its soo all over the place.... that was whack .. plz try again lol ... good try ... next time try to make sense
2007-06-29 05:33:07 · answer #7 · answered by mitchball22 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i love it
2007-06-29 04:40:54 · answer #8 · answered by Natasha 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
u really have talent.........................................................................................................nah i'm lyin. lol.
2007-06-29 11:43:38 · answer #9 · answered by Uno Zero (Is Under-Appreciated) 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋