What do you think of this poem?

Question

Humid sky looks a little colder
He's been wandering for awhile
Out of strength from the soldiers
Who've moved boulders for miles
Called himself a warrior
Gave into to no quarter
After the rebels were taken
Lined up on the side of cliffs
In these hills, black hills,

Son of a freeman
Never was a slave
But to the warrior ethos
He died in bloodshed
And that spot where he lay
Blessed and cursed were his days
Blessed and cursed were his days
When he laid down his sword
He didn't swear off his ways
Now in the eyes of the soldier
Surrender is the route that paves
good intentions of hell
in camps and prison
instead of rolling hills and empty space

Son of a freeman
Never was a slave
Was looking to the west
to the stone of shadows
and the black hills where he used to lay
Son of a freeman
Never was a slave
First and last warrior
Nobody held up his ways

Black hills, these black hills

I think it is about doing what one has to do and it can never be glorified. I would not glorify war. It is more about a celebration of victory that leads to peace but really about a man's life without passing judgment or glorifying it.

Answer 1

yes i like it, it's very deep

Answer 2

It wasn't my cup of tea, but creative. Understand there is glory in neither victory or defeat, and freedom just an idle illusion.

Answer 3

Hi, It was okay i think you can do better. Very good start. You have the heart and becoming a good writer, now let's see some more!!!
poppy1

Answer 4

Good !!! But I read better poem in the game wrriten by English !!! the poem named "Sacred Poem" in the game "Kingdom Of Paradise",It was sooo awsome !!!

Answer 5

it reads like a song to me. There are a couple of verses that repeat, just like a chorus

Answer 6

okay, it's good. lost me, on it, but i like it.
are you a D&D fan? listen to rush?

Answer 7

it's really good.