I went to the ocean
I went alone
The waves were crashing in every night
And they just kept getting harder
I was drowning and screaming for help
But no one could hear me
Until the day, I got tired of cryin'
Of screamin' my life out
So I learned
I learned how to swim
On my own
Soon i was at the shore
At the shore
Where my life became better
ohh better than ever before
Scince that day
I stand tall
I'm no longer underthrall
I stand alone
Out of the crowd
With my head held high
Oh oh oh ohh
Yeah, yeahahh
I went to the ocean
I went alone
The waves were crashing in every night
And they just kept getting harder
I was drowning and screaming for help
But no one could here me
Until the day, I got tired of cryin'
Of screamin' my life out
So I learned
I learned how to swim
On my own
2007-06-28 15:02:14 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Sports ➔ Swimming & Diving
Honestly? Well, I don't like it that much, but if you like it then that's what counts.
2007-06-28 15:05:49 · answer #1 · answered by the Boss 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
So.....I guess you wrote that on your own yeah? How 'bout some music to go along so we can have a listen.
Question.......why is this in swimming and diving?
Hope the medication is helping.
Cheers
Bronco
2007-06-28 22:07:18 · answer #2 · answered by bronkoball 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that was really good, it actually made sense and had a story to it. It was not one of those things where people just thro words in and make a song that makes no sense at all. Good Job.
2007-06-28 22:05:26 · answer #3 · answered by ♥MeGaN♥ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Goes in a few different directions, but it's not bad.
2007-06-28 22:07:17 · answer #4 · answered by Ronnie 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the people on hear answer honestly anyways, lol. i luv it i think its beautiful! i like the part where u learn how to swim. i hope things r well!!! :)
2007-06-28 22:10:49 · answer #5 · answered by cheer4gum 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
well, it not all that original, and its very emo, but hey some people dont care about that stuff, at least you got so far as to right something, i prolly couldnt get that far
2007-06-28 22:08:20 · answer #6 · answered by Dave 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its hard to know becuz i cant hear the music that goes with it, but it seems more like a poem
2007-06-28 22:05:03 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it! Its poetic, and I suspect you wrote this from some experience in your life.
2007-06-28 22:07:06 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
ITS BEAUTIFUL! you should give it to a producer
2007-06-28 22:05:28 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Mr.Kennedy Kennedy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2007-06-28 22:20:32 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋