Cold, clear water
Down from a mountain stream
Cold, clear water
Soaks me in my dreams
Cold, clear water
Splash me with your smile
In your cold, clear water
I can swim for miles and miles and miles
2007-06-28 08:51:17 · 6 answers · asked by TD Euwaite? 6 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I like it TD nice :)))))))))))))))
2007-06-28 09:17:42 · answer #1 · answered by Rita 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
If I heard it maybe not sure what the cold clear water represents
2007-06-28 16:00:25 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think it's very efficient.
It's probably a C+ because it's short.
It's sweet, simple, and I love the extended metaphor and repetition.
2007-06-28 18:47:39 · answer #3 · answered by hello 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'll spare you the obvious come-on flirty comments and just say that this is lovely and sweet.
2007-06-28 16:34:38 · answer #4 · answered by Cinnibuns 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I understand why you got a c+. It's not very good. Sorry. Just being honest. ( My opinion only.)
2007-06-28 15:56:34 · answer #5 · answered by magix151 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
You do know that C+ isn't that good. It's ok but could be improved. Atleast it rhymes.
2007-06-28 15:59:07 · answer #6 · answered by sweet_angel92 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋