What do you think of these haiku/senryu?

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What do you think of these haiku/senryu?

Summer warmth turns chill
Golden leaves dance spirals
In October breeze

Sunday afternoon--
One more televangelist's
Fake altar ego

Summer-end clearance--
Brightly-colored bikinis
Hang like autumn leaves

2007-06-28 07:23:03 · 2 answers · asked by Starfall 6 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry

2 answers

I think they're great! I especially liked the second and third one as they are the most interesting to me, but the first one has really beautiful imagery. :-) :-)

2007-06-28 08:19:02 · answer #1 · answered by yumyum 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋

I liked the 2nd one - but not the others

2007-06-28 07:39:18 · answer #2 · answered by art_flood 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋