i'm floating in an empty sea
this is the last place you left me
tomorrow shall not come to me
nor shine is newfound rays upon me
i'm floating in an empty sea
and i'm the only one it sees
it is a sea of my own misery
a wall you've helped build around me
i'm floating in an empty sea
tied to the bottom with a broken string
i'll never know what really happened to me
or where i've gone or things i've seen
for you took all of me-
i'm floating in an empty sea
this is the last place that you left me
2007-06-28 06:25:08 · 7 answers · asked by tanjha 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Excellent poem. This poem tells me of someone who lost someone and that person is sad or depressed about it. That the person is telling this other person that without the him/her they are empty and unfulfilled.
2007-06-28 06:55:55 · answer #1 · answered by Araiha 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its a very good poem, but its kinda sad.Right now theres a possibility you feel like no one is there for you or people are there but they dont listen to whats going on with you.It sounds like you feel you need love or some one who truely cares about you.
~Country Girl~
2007-06-28 14:51:46 · answer #2 · answered by redneck_countrygal_27 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"tied to the bottom with a broken string" means more to me than you'll ever know. what a great line!
what on earth does the question mean though?
2007-06-28 13:34:14 · answer #3 · answered by Kurt H™ FC Steaua Bucureşti 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yuk
2007-06-28 14:15:10 · answer #4 · answered by art_flood 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Touching and sad, yet hopeful. Very nice. I like it and would like to see more from you. Good job!
2007-06-28 13:33:38 · answer #5 · answered by The Dark Prince 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it alot!! keep up the writing!!
2007-06-28 13:37:01 · answer #6 · answered by Emily K 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i thought it was beautiful. keep writing :)
2007-06-28 15:14:15 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋