A Perfect Night
A perfect night
from dusk to dark
and dark to dawn.
Darkness breeds
fades away to breeze
and breath of
summer's swaying trees.
Lovers are born
on bicycles
walking down the street
they smile awhile
touching hands
nothing seems out of spite
Barry and Betty
each say to themselves
and part ways
2007-06-27 16:47:55 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
wow i am really surprised by the answer every1 gave. so after all you all do steal poems if you like it. That is ****** **** ppl. You don't know how hard ppl work for them. you all should be ashamed. sorry pal, couldn't say anything about your poem cuz i didn't even read it. Good luck, n don't post poems if you are thinkin about publishing them. you never know what might happen.
2007-06-27 18:14:52 · answer #1 · answered by mimi247t 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋
Don't worry, I won't steal it. It is not to my taste.
Sorry, but if you posted it here, you probably wanted opinions.
Doc
2007-06-27 23:52:38 · answer #2 · answered by Doc Hudson 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
i wouldnt steal this, its not my style, or my prefered topic, it was okay... but everyones views on poems are different, so if you like it thats really all that matters!
2007-06-28 00:24:59 · answer #3 · answered by Waiting for the End 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Nope, I won't steal it.. I don't REALLY love it, but keep writing anyways!
:D ~Peaches
2007-06-27 23:54:16 · answer #4 · answered by Peaches 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
OK you can keep this one. I don't want it or even worst steal it.
2007-06-27 23:57:33 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
You are a pocket fisherman .
2007-06-27 23:51:33 · answer #6 · answered by danielle p 1 · 0⤊ 2⤋