I have a poem, I need to know what you think.?

Question

In darken lands, man strives.
Hand to mouth, he survives.
Good and evil war, one is slew.
Into moon beams a soul did flew.
Now stands alone, unknown one thrives.

Answer 1

I really enjoyed the first two lines. "Did flew" is incorrect grammar though. I liked it all together. I would have loved to see more details. I thought it to be a little too short. But it was pretty cool. 6/10

Answer 2

I thinks i like it !

Answer 3

its ok. but.... "did flew" isn't proper english.... and sounds dumb. it should be simply..... "a soul flew"....