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As we get older, people notice different kind of change around them. For example, one can notice change in color, personality, behavior, or lifestyle. The transformation in person life is most difficult of form of change. The theme of change is discuses most often in Walkin’ The Dog by Walter Mosley.

Answer 1

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As we get older, people notice different kinds of change around them. For example, one can notice changes in color, personality, behavior, or lifestyle. The transformation in a person's life is the most difficult form of change. The theme of change is discussed most often in Walkin' the Dog, by Walter Mosley.

Answer 2

As we grow older, we begin to pay more attention to the different changes that take place around us. A few examples of the most common changes we might notice include our appearances, personalities, behaviors, and lifestyles. In our lives, the most difficult form of change is transformation, or complete change. The theme of change is frequently discussed in Walter Mosley's Walkin' The Dog.

Answer 3

As we get older, we experience many changes; one can notice change in appearance, personality, behavior, or lifestyle. "Walkin the Dog" by Walter Mosley deals with the most difficult transformation of all, personal life.

Answer 4

http://www.bostonreview.net/BR24.6/mccarthy.html
RE: "always outnumbered, always outgunned saw the gradual transformation of Socrates from a learner to a teacher"

According to the above review, this book is a continuation on the same character. So why not start by making that the subject of your introduction? It still deals with "change" but more specific to where the main character originated and how he develops in this new book.

If you want to start with a general concept on change, I would mention how "the only constant is change" or "the more things change, the more they stay the same." Then lead into how Walter Mosley's character Socrates Fortlow has developed or changed or transformed over time.

So I would keep the universal theme of "change" but start over and write something more clearly focused on this book. Otherwise, I think what you have written is too general, and does not say anything "moving" the reader toward the topic.

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