what do you think of my poem???

Question

i took some ppl's advice so i'm posting a poem i wrote not so long ago. i'm still kinda shakey b/c i'm not sure of what some of u all might say or if this all wud just blow up in my face..so yea. BUT plz be truthful and give me some feedback =^-^='''


ALL WITH MY MIND....

I must confess that i'm not so innocent all the time.
True...i'm not de-purified, but that doesn't nessasarily mean my mind.

Trust me. It wasn't just your imagination.
That look WAS given.

A look you dont understand.
Desperation, accusation, a temptation...says any common man.

Dont get so offensive.
Because my defenses are extreamly high.

What are you gonna do? Organize a restraining order?
But why?


All I did was simply look at you
And undressed you with my eyes

<3 -P H E N O M E N A L
What'd u think???

Answer 1

Makes us want to go pro thought control

Answer 2

Kind of wanders. I didn't really see any rhyme or reason.