Now,I'm stuck on Earth.I wish I could go back there and teach him a lesson.OK,from the begining.Me and Sajfer did the 'fusion'.Right after we separated again,I couldn't believe my eyes.The 'fusion'was called Sajferonat.The strange thing was that when we did the fusion,we became one person.After we separated,our fusion form came to life.He was 1000% evil and he had both our powers.He became the strongest thing possible.Years later Sajferonat rushed into my HQ and destroyed me quickly.If I could transformed into my 'final form',I would have beaten him.But,I didn't have time.
2007-06-27 01:43:01 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Science & Mathematics ➔ Astronomy & Space
Cool
2007-06-28 02:40:36 · answer #1 · answered by *purple world* 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
try connecting the sentences and make it have little sense so that the reader won't get puzzled like I did.
But it is good for start. Hope you accept my suggestions
Good luck
2007-06-27 09:04:32 · answer #2 · answered by joysam 【ツ】 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It seems extremely scattered and unexplained for a story but "the difference between fiction and reality? fiction has to make sense"
2007-06-27 08:52:13 · answer #3 · answered by Rhyannonn C 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
WOW!!
currently, i dont belive it.
im not saying its stupid.
all im trying to do is improve your writing.
ok. youre lacking details.
add some and itll be a GREAT start!!
:)
2007-06-27 10:33:54 · answer #4 · answered by ♥ F@$H!0N ♥ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
dude what is this taking ideas from dragonball be more original and check how you right man cant understand anything
2007-06-27 09:30:08 · answer #5 · answered by dan 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
What is this, Dragon Ball Z on crack?
2007-06-27 10:53:05 · answer #6 · answered by Nunna Yorz 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
give me a nude moment with Sajferonat i will make him behave
2007-06-30 09:33:20 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You are wasting your time posting these pieces of crap!
2007-06-28 17:32:40 · answer #8 · answered by ? 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
back to your comic books
2007-06-27 09:00:08 · answer #9 · answered by Gene 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Uh...*Scratch...* Uh... No...*Scratch...*
2007-06-27 09:01:36 · answer #10 · answered by Arun W 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋