should i follow a career in writing?

Question

some people say i should write, cuz i write good, so instead of turning to friends, i ask those of complete strangers to rate my writings. so be honest, i kno u ***** are haha

to explain the point is hard
due to the different views and aspects that we conintue to investigate and the fuse we protect differ from everyone, from the ones with guns to the ones who runs from the pig,

from the ones who wear a wig to the ones who buy the fig instead if picking and the sickn'thedying say different from the ones who are trying to make money from the ones who worship a bunny, you think its funny but the drain thats runny

says nothing can be contolled and the truth is yet untold
i dont belive theres a meaning, its a man-made concept to decept the actual truth that the proof we dont have and never will is considered a hope and a fact set still.
some says its to live a happy life, but others say its to kill with a knife, some say its to **** and others to hunt ducks. everyones has opinions which mean the billions reasons are all created and theyre debated from others with different direction of the reason to our perfection.

there is no meaning of life and night after night no matter what you say or think does not create a actual truth considering humans are pretentios creatures who say theyre the **** but not a bit correct, but whos to inspect?

who will say were wrong, nothing because were so strong that the other animals are the wrong and weaker, and the speaker to preach his preaches does not reach every beach therefore the philosophy cannot teach everyone to conform to their belifes that "god" made all the leafs, and says you cannot each beef.

no one is right, beacuse we stay up all night trying to fight the fact from lie and contract the pie we made along with every other daily basis including being a racsist. everything we do today is somethin someone used to say and somehow it stuck to society and the thought of a diety, is personal opionion whether or not theyre be a prisoner, a minion, of hell, yet we cannot tell how the places exists and we persist to inform everyone the storm of fire from the higher power, yet thers no proof, and i bet the roof of reality does not match the the tally of reckless ancient human beings considering the **** were seeing in the labs, and the tabs of acid , from lake ontario to lake placid.

its just a method to control to say your "soul" is more than energy and a bowl of pot will just rot your mind, yet everyone is one of a kind, and were free, but to say that we see how free we can be is not as true as we wish it could be.

Answer 1

Okay.
A few things come to mind. First of all, this is riddled with grammatical and spelling errors. On the other hand, that sort of contributes to the edgy tone of your writing. The thing is, though, you'll need to master grammar to be a professional writer. Then, if you want, you can purposefully "break the rules" on compositions where it helps to bring home your point.

Secondly, some of the rhymes seem to be a bit forced. For example:
"...from the ones who wear a wig to the ones who buy the fig instead if picking and the sickn'thedying say different from the ones who are trying to make money from the ones who worship a bunny, you think its funny but the drain thats runny..."

It's not that bad, but it's not as good as most of the rest. It just needs a little more refinement. To be a writer, in a way you'll have to be your own worst critic and be able to see something that's just not quite good enough. Then, beat yourself up to improve it.

On a positive note, I could see this as a rap song, or something like that. Writing music can be a lucrative and rewarding career.

There's this song called "Spirit In The Sky" and it's written by Norman Greenbaum. Basically, he makes so much money every year from royalties off that song...he doesn't need to do anything else. He lives off the money he gets from writing that one song!!!

Overall, this is very good. I didn't want to tell you that until the end, though, because you need to heed what I told you above. Keep doin' it...I want to read more of your stuff.

Answer 2

You have very good stuff in your mind and can be something really entrancing!

However ,you have to learn how to capture the attention of the readers! You need to captivate them.Don't try to impress them though.

The first one is on the grammar. Be relaxed when your doing it and make it kind of lighter such that it is easy to understand.

Then also punctuations can play a great deal in the material that you write,commas,full stops and the rest.

Where you place them does matter!For example,all this paragraph has only one sentence;

"its just a method to control to say your soul" is more than energy and a bowl of pot will just rot your mind, yet everyone is one of a kind, and were free, but to say that we see how free we can be is not as true as we wish it could be."

Otherwise,

keep practicing!

Answer 3

yes!